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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。
Saving money or using tomorrow's money The arguement over saving money or using tomorrow's money has recently been bought in focus.Quite a few deem that saving money is a good habit,but others,in contrast,take using tomorrow's money today as the premier choice.Personally,i think saving money is important. The main reason for my inclination for saving money is that thrift is a chinese traditional virtue.China has a very serious poverty problem.If we have used up all of tomorrow's money,then how can we help those poor people? Furthermore,we all know that earning money is not as easy as spending money.So we should save money but not using tomorrow's money. What's more,the future is uncertain.We all know that money is important.A person should save money for the rainy day. The using tomorrow's money way of thinking is too limited.As a college student,I am supposed to hold that good habit of saving money,because it's not only a chinese traditional virtue but also a good attitude towards life.
