题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章层次较为清晰。
Computer and Man In recent years, computer has become more and more common, and lot's of people recognize computer as essential electricity apparent. However, computer is important to our lives, it also has many disadvantages. Now, we just can't not be away from computer, such as, we do lot's of work depending on computer, we enjoy ourselves through computer, we reach information from computer, and so on. If we don't have computer, maybe we will not do anything. With the increasing using computer, people have give up many function, we always write on the computer, so we sometimes how to write on pen. And, there are lots of temper things in the computer, some people can't make use of it correctly, so they may choose a wrong road. In a word, we should make full use of the computer, and define computer as a tool ,just helping us to compete things.