2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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On Excessive Packaging Nowdays,more and more market have a bad scean that on excessive packaging.What reasons are arise this questions? First of all,as ecnomic go up,many market do not regard many,they are concerned about only relief.Second,people like beauty goods,so,market will use on excessive packing for contant the costomed requst.Last but not least,custom lose duty about protect environment. In my opinion,I think this is a terrible sitution,we should stoped to this things arise.