2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词。

Living in this era, we should feel fortunate. Various commodities which are very delicate can be seen everywhere.They are so pretty that we couldn't have the heart to leave aside them.After all the thing which is crafted please us easily, even though it has a higher price because of its packaging simply. Everyone likes beauty, but excessive packaging that costs more money though a little change is not necessary and wasteful.The packing box would be threw or lost our interest when we have taken it home for several days. The goods whose core value is its cute should be cute, if not, it needn't. We have no need to pay extra for excessive packaging which is not worth the money.