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Should We Save Money All The time ? When it comes to save money or not , there will be a heated discussion about it , some folks are in favor of it ,others are not . Just like that every coin has two saides , different people insisit on different views. However, from my perspective , i support on saving money at right moment.I will justify my point from two aspects. At the begining , being a college student, we do not have enough money to satisfy ourselves at any time , saving money is a wise way to settle most of the issues . Collecting coupons , looking for group-buy deals and buying on sale clothes are paret of the approaches we can ues to save money . To some extend , not only can we purchse what we want , but also save some money to realize what we want to do . Furthermore , saving money is a good habit for all of us , espcially our college students . Though some folks say that it seems not a smart way to consume in this way , do what we can do to save money is worth to imitate. At least ,it reflects the valuable virtue of our own individuals . In a word , college students save money should be advocated , which will spread positive influence upon society.
