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2004年专业四级英语作文真题:电话与写信

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:23浏览次数:1453
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Nowadays young people tend to phone more often than write to each other. So, some say that phones will kill letter writing. What is your opinion?
Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?
You are to write in three parts:
In the first part, state clearly what your view is.
In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

题目:Letter Writing Will Not Be Killed
字数:200满分:100分

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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

will phones kill letter writing?this topic has caused a heated discussion among the society as the increasing people choose phones to communicate with others in distant rather than writing letters in modern society. some people think that phones will replace letters since it more effective and convenient to communicate with others while others hold the opposite idea. as far as i am concerned, writing letters will never be abandoned by people in nowadays because it has some unique advantages in safety and expressing men's affection over phones. letter writing will not be killed. firstly, letter is more secret and safe than phone. it is common believed that the characters are more believable than words. so in some formal occasion, for instance staff in company are asked to use letters to talk about business and officials also choose letters to keep touch with their colleagues in most time.secondly,most people would rather express their feelings and affections in writing than speak directly using phones. when we feel happy or upset and want to others known,we will choose writing letters first cause it is hard to tell others sometime and it is more comfortable for us to write in a letter. especially on occasion that we want to express our love to people, so that is why the love letters are so popular. what's more, writing letters is a more decline way to refuse others i think. in conclusion ,letter writing has its own advantages in communication safety and expressing feelings than phones.so i think it never be replaced by phones.

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