小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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A picture is on my desk. This is a picture of Jim's family. Jim's family is from English. The man is Jim's father. He is a doctor. The woman is Jim's mother. She is very nice. And she is a teacher. Close to Jim is his sister. His sister is cute, and she is six-year-old. They are happiness.