2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句式变化较为丰富，但需注意文中个别句子错误；请注意分段。

In my opinion, Three reasons as follow contribute to this job situation . Firstly, Corperations built by individuals provide a multitude of opportunities after 1978 , most companies are built by government ,and a small portion of people can be employed, sometimes working in this companies is the best choice ,so there is no need to change . Secondly,