2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；请注意分段。

In my opinion, Three reasons as follows contribute to this job situation . Firstly, Corperations built by individuals provide a multitude of opportunities after 1978 , most companies are built by the government ,and a small portion of people can be employed, sometimes working in this companies is the best choice ,so there is no need to change . Secondly, as we all know ,The 21 century is information time ! it is far more convenient and fast to realize the whole world and know outstanding persons how to achieve their goals, their tell us that we need a try! more tries , more jobs we did