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In the last few years, disposal bags has been used widly in public. Whenever we come into the supermarket, will see many people are carring disposal bags which are full of things. Why people would like to use it? I my opinion, because it brings people great convenience. However, it not only benefit us, but also bring us some unexpected questions.Firstly, the material of disposal bags is undecomposable, in particuar, it will pollute the field, so will prohibit the growing up of plants. Secondly, using the disposal bags is also a kind of wasting resources. In case of that, we can recycling use disposal bags. In a word, Using disposal bags pollute environment heavily. It is significant for us to end using disposal bags. What meaning it stand for? The most important point is that limiting use disposal bags can protect the environment. In the other hand, we can save the precious resource we depond on in life.
