2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays, with the development of the Internet,online shopping is becoming more and more popular. The online shopping has been a significant of fashion. A majority of people extremely like online shopping. On the one hand, online shopping has a lot of benifits. For example, online shopping can save time. You can see more items at the same time.Moreover, you would not have to take you items back home by yourself, the item will be sent after you buy it. On the other hand, online shopping also have a lot of disadvantages. If you are shopping online, you would not the quality of the item. Furthermore, you would buy the item influenced by the advertisement. From my perspective, online shopping is like a double-edged. You can get the convenient from the online shopping, at the same time, you would maybe get some worse items from the online shopping. All in all, we should have a rational attitude to the online shopping.