2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowaday,many people are shopping in Internet so that Online shopping become a fashion.I'm always shop online.Online shopping have some advantaged,you can buy something that is no in supermaket round.And you can shopping in Internet when the weather is bad.In addition to,the price of goods is cheapper that supermaket round. On the aother hand,Online shopping have some problem.The quality of goods is bad when the goods was sent,but you want to exchange new one.It is difficult.Insides,you can't konw the goods whether true. In my opinion,more and more people shopping in Internet.when we look at a goods ,we can watch comment of goods.It can let me konw message of goods.Then,we can ask some question of goods for shoper.