2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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A variety of your facial expression ,like a calm smile,raising eyebrow or frown,can fully and abundantly express your thoughts and feelings.In fact,think carefully about that your facial expression has been revealed before you begin to open your mouth.A variety of your facial expression ,like a calm smile,raising eyebrow or frown,can fully and abundantly express your thoughts and feelings.In fact,think carefully about that your facial expression has been revealed before you begin to open your mouth.