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The emotional bond a child secures with its parents has a greater impact on its education than previously thought, a report suggests. 萨顿信托基金会(The Sutton Trust)的一份报告指出,良好的亲子关系对孩子日后的教育学习影响重大,远超以往预期。 The Sutton Trust study says children's early attachment to parents has far-reaching consequences for their ability to speak, learn and think. 研究发现,婴幼儿与父母的亲子关系会对他们日后的读、写以及思辨能力产生深远影响。 Parents who are insecure themselves find it harder to provide children with security, it says. 报告指出,那些缺乏安全感的父母很难给予孩子关怀。 And the report calls for more help so parents can develop such crucial bonds.
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