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2007年12月英语六级作文真题:Digital Age

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:29浏览次数:1687
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题目 Digital Age
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1.如今,数字化产品越来越多,如…
2.使用数字化产品对于人们学习工作和生活的影响
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分84.0分
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单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

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The Digital Age Nowadays,there is a growing number of people using digital productions.Undoubtedly,the digital age is coming and our life is full of mobile phone,computer,pad or mp3 and so on. Everything has two sides and the use of digital is not an exception.On the one hand,we can take up the least news to broaden our horizons and find academic information effectively.Moreover,we can work at home on line rather than go to the firm.On the other hand,people often spend much time playing it therefore forget the more important matters,especially teenagers are addicted to playing that.With the rapid development of digital,they are facing serious outdated,which result in more and more electronic rubbish.Last but not least,excessive using attributes to alienating relationship among relatives or friends. We should be viewed as a two-edged sword and make the best of its benefits to have a harmonious life.

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