2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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With the development of Internet technology, E-commerce promises well as the main commerce model in the future, Online shopping has become something of a fad.The online product selection is greater than the product selection available in stores, what is more, peopel just pay less money for the same thing.Online shopping brings people great convenience, who don't like walking outside, you can choose commodities on the web, order throngh your mouse , just stay home that the delivery man would send those commodities you like to you. What is the bad? The goods may not be which you think it is, it really bothers you.You buy a bad mood and have one more thing which is a pity to throw away.So you have to keep vigilant when you go shopping online.