2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

As is showed in the chart,the higher the degree is ,the the higher weekly earnings will be.And so is the unemployment rate. It's obvious that the earnings is tied to the education pays.It's often believed that high education pays lead to more chances df job.Of course,when the resumes are sent to the office,the high degree will attract manager more.However,your capability is in the air.A company accept an employeesoas to earn more,as is what the diploma can't decide.the high education pays provides you with high plat form and more chance,while the great capability promise you vital profit. In this society,large population makes it hard to find job.we can only coordinate the education pays with capability to get high salary.Just strengthen yourself by exercise.the potencial is in your own.That will defeat the cruel reality。