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Nothing is more important than saving money ,which is our traditional quality be a Chinese. The opinion of these ways of saving money may not make a consumers smart is wrong. Nowadays,the way of save money is spread around our life,and it's rise that who living with these ways.such as,collect coupons,group-buy and buy clothes in a sale...so,I can't agree more with we should save money by any way. In the valentine's day,I have a good time with my girlfriend.