能够使用一些简单的从句;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强;请注意分段。
In recent years, more and more museum has been to free admission for us, the important gold is our citizens have de freedom right to enjoy the culture ativity. besides, citizens will has more and more opportunity to improve their knowledge lever. But every corns has two sides, more and more free admission to museums will dute to some worst infect, such as reducing the quality of service or making the Safety index endenced and so on. In my opinions, we shuold select the more important side.So we should try our best to make citizens enjoy more oppotunity scuh as free admission to museums.Only in this way,