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In recent years, more and more museum has been to free admission for us, the important gold is our citizens have the freedom right to enjoy the culture activity. Besides, citizens will have more and more opportunity to improve the lever of knowledge. But every corns have two sides, more and more free admission to museums will dute to some worst infect, such as reducing the quality of service or making the Safety index descend and so on. In my opinions, I think we should select the more important side.So we should try our best to make citizens enjoy more oppotunity scuh as free admission to museums.Only in this way, our social culture will have more connotation.