2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；请作者增加词汇丰富度，希望作者能够较为熟练的使用学术词汇；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；可以适当增加副词的使用。

With the rapid development of the science and technology, computer has become a basis , tools in our daily life. More and more people use it to surf and watch movies. But, as we all know, everything has two sides. Some people claim computer connect everyone who uses it from all over the world. It improve the rapid of globalization. We can also share the web source. But, other people hold the different oppinon.