2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays,computers have became a very important part of our daily lives.With the hlep of the computer,we can do various things at home. As we all know,sale on the internet has been more and more popular.Everything which is necessary for us,such as Foods,clothes,tickets,we can find on the internet.And we can search on the internet for the information.We can also communicate with others who maybe is unfamiliar for us . However,every coin has two sides.Computer can also do harm to us .Because so mach information can be found on the internet,we are probably get unhealthy information inevitably.And many teenagers are addicated to the computer games . In my opinion,we can take the advantages of the computer and let us in our own control instead of the computer.