高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown was a beautiful place. It was surrounded by many trees, fish was free in clear river, the houses were crude and streets were narrow, the people were work hard and life was poor. Now, there are many tall buildings, factories and stores, you can see many kinds of cars and vehicles in the streets. With industry developing the environment goes worst. trees are reduced and fish disappear. Pollution treatment is important project now. We wish it come back.