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初中英语命题作文真题演练(82):回信

发布时间:2014-02-18 16:36浏览次数：559次

要求：

根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。（信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信内）

假如你叫李玲，是英国中学生露茜的笔友，你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据她来信的内容写一封回信。针对她的困惑，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些建议，告诉她应该做什么，不应该做什么。

Dear Li Ling,
These days Tom Cruise, the film star, always comes into my mind. I think of him night and day. I just sit in my room and watch videos of his films again and again. I’ve written hundreds of letters to him and sent e-mails to his fan club, but all I get back are only photos with his names on them. I dream that some day I’ll meet him and that he’ll feel the same way about me. I don’t want to learn my lessons any more, and I’ll have final exams next month.
I’m thinking of running away to Hollywood（好莱坞）to meet him. Can you help me with the problem?
Yours,

Lucy

Hi Lucy,
Nice to hear from you. __________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Ling

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评语：

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文：

Hi Lucy, Nice to hear from you. Everyone has his favorite stars and there’s nothing wrong with that. I understand you. But I don’t think what you do is right since you are a student. You’d better read more interesting books and have more sports in your free time. Stop writing to him and watching his films. You may also tell your problem to your parents and teachers. I’m sure they’ll help you. Running away to Hollywood is a wrong idea. Work hard on your lessons and get ready for the exams. Your future is in your hands. Yours, Li Ling

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