2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(28):战胜失败

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；有效的运用了一些复杂句；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

I think that the failure is the mother of success,because only get failure,we can realize where we are wrong and from which we can improve ourselves step by step.Let's look these successful people they also have got failure many times like us.So don't be sad when you are in failure.