2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(28):战胜失败

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I think that the failure is the mother of success,because only come across failure,we can realize where we are wrong and from which we can improve ourselves step by step.Let's look those who are triumphant,they also have got failure in many times.So don't be sorrowful when you are in failure but go on with faith.