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文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；如若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；上下文衔接手法不熟练，没有能够有效的使用衔接词；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
Success and failure ate common in our life , We win or lose games to others ; we succeed in doing a good job or we fail at times . Every one of us has such kind of experiences from time to time. Give your opinion on failure and success with at least one example.
