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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
用词灵活多样，也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Since 100 years ago, as the result of the human beings' effort, the environment has been changed a lot. Some areas like education haven been made some progress, but some areas nature environment still need to development. First of all, compared with 100 years ago, people really improve their lives from many aspects, for instance, education, medical, and science. More and more countries think the basic education is very important to the citizens. In China, government force each children who are over than 8-year-old and under than 16-year-old need to go to primary school and secondary school to taken the education. Recently, much more undergraduate students start to study post graduate program continuously, and more than 1million would graduate from university. This is an obviously progress in the education, because, before 100 years, the common people do not have the right to take the education, especially the girls. However, every one has the right and the enough funds to go to school and acquire knowledge and skills. Due to the progress of the education, more and more people could get the special skills to develop the science and medical. People who get the higher education could study and work out the better machine and medicine. The lasts medicine and medical machine could help doctors treat paints and overcome much more disease. Many disease can not kill people anymore. Unluckily, besides those developed areas mentioned above, there is also some areas still need to under controlled and development. For example, the population. As the progress made in the medical, doctors could treatment some difficult disease and save person's life. This is a good news for people to expand their lifetime, but it also brings a bad news that the larger population would damage this earth. Nowadays, the population in the whole world has brake up 70 million in 2013. That means, the source are decreasing with the increasing population at the same time. How can we promise that we could provide enough resource to our following generations. In addition, the environment pollution would be another area need be paid attention. Air, water, and other resources have been polluted through the humans' activities. Compared the environment with the 100 years ago, there is nothing worth to be proud. More and more rivers and forests disappeared, and the air has been become hard to breath. Like the Beijing's sky, it is hard to show the blue and the air is full of poison to damage people's health. Therefore, society really make a lot of progress and lead us lives to be better and convenient. However, we could not ignore those areas which still need to be controlled. The technology should help us change into continuous developing.
