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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
句式变化多样；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；词汇表达丰富度要注意，不过单词拼写错误较多。
As about picture,is vividly revelas a phonomen is with the more higher graduate diplioma the less the unemployment. About this questioon,different people have different opinions,some people believe that If you have process a haigher diplioma.you will have a great job and a comfortable life in the future.however,the other people believe that it is not business that if you have a good job in the future about higher,they thought ability is more importer than diploma. In my prespect,as it picture dispicted,the diploma more important in the society nowdays,it not be let us more work hard in our study but also let our learn more knowleadge,could be improve ourseleves and open our horizens.so,i could not more agree that haigher diploma is important,we must be study hard
