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In the modern world, people have many kinds consumption concept. Some people's idea about consumption is that we should use our money objective, don't be foolly to buy things; others are holding the contrary idea. In my opinion, i think we should be economical and sensible as a consumer. As we all know, money is not easy to earn, so we can's use it blindly. we should be a sensible consumer. There are some opinion about how we save our money. First, when we go out to eat or travel, we should look through the Internet to see whether there has group-buy. Meanwhile, we can save more money and energy to go to the destination to know about its imformation. At sometimes, when festival, the dealer usually to high the price of product when you don't know about their imformation. And then, you will be treated. Second, if you want buy cloth, i advice you better to buy on the net. Although it is not reliable sometimes, it can let you get what you wanted. in addition, it is save time than you go out to buy in the object parlor. To sum up, there are vary kinds way to be a smart consumer, and most impeortant is that we save money at the same time . As far as i see, i think a smart consumer is to save money when consumption.
