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字数：300 满分：100分
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；简单句稍微有点多，可适当增加从句使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
In the modern world, people have many kinds consumption concept. Some people's idea about consumption is that we should use our money in objective, don't be foolish to buy things; others are holding the contrary idea. In my opinion, i think we should be economical and smart as a consumer. As we all know, money is not easy to earn, so we can's use it blindly. we should be a sensible consumer. There are some opinion about how we save our money. First, when we go out to eat or travel, we should look through the Internet to see whether has group-buy. Meanwhile, we can save more money and energy to go to the destination to know about its information. However, when sometimes, like festival, the dealer usually to raise the price of product when you don't know about their information. And then, you will be treated. Second, if you want buy cloth, you better to buy on the Internet. Although it is not reliable sometimes, it can let you get what you wanted. in addition, it is save time than you go out to buy in the object parlor. To sum up, there are vary kinds way to be a smart consumer, and most impeortant is that we save money at the same time . As far as i see, i think a smart consumer is to save money when consumption.
