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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。
In the modern world, people have many different consumption concepts. Some people's idea about consumption is that we should use our money in objective rather than be foolish to buy things; others are holding the contrary idea. In my opinion, i think we should be economical as smart a consumer. As we all know, money is not easy to earn, so we can's use it blindly, we should be a sensible consumer. Of cause there are some opinions about how we save our money in buying. First, when we go out to eat or travel, we should look through on the Internet to see whether has group-buy. Meanwhile, in this way, we can save money and energy better than go to the destination to know about its information. However, when sometimes, like festival, the dealer usually raise the price of production. If you don't know their information you will be treated. Second, if you want buy cloth, you would better to buy on the Internet. Although it is not reliable sometimes, it can let you get what you are wanted. in addition, it is saving time than you go out to buy in the object parlor. To sum up, there are various kinds ways to be a smart consumer, and most impeortant is that we save money at the same time . As far as i see, i think a smart consumer is to save money when consumption.