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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33546
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

In the modern world, people have many different consumption concepts. Some people's idea about consumption is that we should use our money in objective rather than be foolish to buy things; others are holding the contrary idea. In my opinion, I think we should be economical as a smart consumer. As we all know, money is not easy to earn, so we can's use it blindly, we should be a sensible consumer. Of cause there are some opinions about how we save our money in buying. First, when we go out to eat or travel, we should look through on the Internet to see whether has group-buy. Meanwhile, in this way, we can save money and energy better than going to the destination to know about its information. However, when sometimes, like festival, the dealers usually raise the price of production. If you don't know their information you will be treated. Second, if you want to buy cloth, you would better buy on the Internet. Although it is not reliable sometimes, it can let you get what you are wanted. In addition, it is saving time than you go out to buy in the object parlor. To sum up, there are various kinds ways to be a smart consumer, and most impeortant is that we save money at the same time . As far as I see, I think a smart consumer that is to save money when consumption.

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