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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。
In the modern world, people have many different consumption concepts. Some people's idea about consumption is that we should use our money in objective rather than be foolish to buy things; others are holding the contrary idea. In my opinion, I think we should be economical as a smart consumer. As we all know, money is not easy to earn, so we can's use it blindly, and we should be a sensible consumer. Of cause there are some opinions about how we save our money in buying. First, we should look through on the Internet to see whether has group-buy when we go out to eat or travel. Meanwhile, in this way, we can save money and energy better than going to the destination to know about its information. However, when sometimes, like festival, the dealers usually raise the price of production. If you don't know their information you will be treated. Second, if you want to buy clothes, you would better buy on the Internet. Although it is not reliable sometimes, it can let you get what you are wanted. In addition, it is saving time than you go out to buy in the object parlor. To sum up, there are various kinds ways to be a smart consumer, and most important is that we save money at the same time. As far as I see, I think to save money when consumption that is a smart consumer doing.