小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend .Her name called sally .She is a fashion lady and she have a lovely daughter.Now she work in Guangzhou but the baby in hometown SO she miss her daughter very much.Everyday she call the baby and speak to her.The baby have two years old .Today we are go to the lotus supermarket buy the shoes for her gift.Does she like our gift shoes or not ?