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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3577
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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文章用词太过单一,请作者增加词汇丰富度;如若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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The pie chart shows that the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA. This chard list six kinds of fast food in Hamburgers, Pizza, French Fries, Fried Chicken, Tacos and Sushi. The most popular fast food is Hamburgers which take up 33% of total fast food. The figure of Pizza and French Fries are similar, constituting 26% and 22% respectively. These three kinds of fast food take over than 81% of the total fast food in teenagers' preference. The rest of three kinds of food have only 19% amount of total food fast food preference. The fried chicken and tacos have 9% and 7% of preference respectively. Sushi is the last one and only got the 3% of the total preference. Overall, to the teenagers, hamburgers, pizza and french fries are their favorite fast food. And dramatically, the Sushi would be the last food they would like to choose.

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