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Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? Recently,there happened several events that too many tourists in attractions bring too much pressure and harm, which caused a hot debate whether tourism bring harm to the environment or not. Some experts and environmentalists held that tourism will bring harm to environment. But most civilians did not coincide with them.
