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小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:32浏览次数:7153
要求:
描述我的新老师。
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作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;请注意分段。

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Nowadays ,i start my new subject accounting so i meet my teacher Miss zheng .She is slim and not tall young lady .She have not so beautiful .Because her face have spot and skin little bit yellow and also the eyes is small .She speak mardrin with her hometown accent when she teacher us course .Everyday she is busy on the class ,everyone have the question will ask she as that "Miss zheng, what's about this ?Can you tell me how to do it?"Later she will answer you .She is serious on the class but after off class she really kind person .We saw she lend the money to the collage without take the receipt .Anyway ,i like she teacher us.

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