2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇，以及部分学术词汇，单词拼写也要仔细。

On maintaining trust Along with the development of technology the relationships among people seems become unfaimliair as well as the untrust.Now I'll talk something about it. Trust,a faimliair word,is a necessarity to all of us.Yet we become more and more untrust to other.For example,on one wants to help the old lady who fall down careless for the reason that many of us are afriad of being cheated which is a common phenomenoa that can be seen and heard recently. In my opinion,according to the change,the following measures could be enforced:First,we ourselves should trust others properly.Then,the government must take some actions to deal with it.Only by doing these can we maintain trust