题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
On maintaining trust Along with the development of technology the relationships among people seems become unfaimliar as well as the untrust.Now I'll talk something about it. Trust,a timelier word,is a necessary to all of us.Yet we become more and more untrust to others.For example,on one wants to help the old lady who falls down careless for the reason that many of us are afraid of being tricked which is a common phenomena that can be seen and heard recently. In my opinion,according to the change,the following measures could be enforced:First,we ourselves should trust others properly.Then,the government must take some actions to deal with it.Only by doing these can we maintain trust well