题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。
On maintaining trust Along with the development of technology the relationships among people seems become unfaimliar as well as the untrust.Now I'll talk something about it. Trust,a timelier word,is a necessary to all of us.Yet we become more and more untrust to others.For example,on one wants to aid the old lady who falls down careless for the reason that many of us are afraid of being tricked which is a hot phenomena that can be seen and heard recently. In my opinion,in accordance with the change,the following measures could be enforced:First,we ourselves should trust others properly.Then,the government must take some actions to deal with it.Only by doing these can we maintain trust well