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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;文章在句法方面做的很棒,复杂句的比例可适当提高;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用;连词使用偏少。
Resume Name: Li Ming Sex: Male Date of birth: June 15th, 1986 Marital status: Single Job objective: Foreign trade clerk Education background I graduated from Foreign Language Department, Beifang University in 2008 with excellent scores in all subjects. Personal skills I have a good command of English, and I am skilled in listening, speaking, reading and writing in English. My second foreign language is German, and I have acquired basic skills on speaking German. Besides, I am familiar with the process of foreign trade. Hobbies Playing basketball, singing and watching movies.