2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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① Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over excessive packaging in our country. ② It is known to all that excessive packaging has negative influences on consumers. ③ And people would turn pale at the very mention of excessive packaging. ① There are many reasons why excessive packaging emerges, but in general, they come down to three major ones. ② For one thing, I argue, Chinese consumers care more about packaging than product itself. ③ For another, the packaging often represents the quality of product, so the manufacturer is eager to do excessive packaging. ④ But the prime reason is perhaps that the department concerned turns a blind eye to this irrational phenomenon. ① In regard to this problem, steps should be taken to minimize it. ② The first thing we should do is to emphasize product's quality over its packaging. ③ Another thing we can do is to strengthen the supervision on excessive packaging. ④ In addition, the Weibo is one of the most effective media that remind consumers to spend reasonably