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At present, The packaging of goods becomes more and more attracting our eyes. Nevertheless excessive packaging has stimulated people's widely concern and been greatly exaggerated by interest-driven merchants The reasons why makers tend to excessive packaging may result from the steady growth of people living standards, so people prefer to make purchase of things which look diaphanous and beautiful so that they could give others as gifts which can win others' heart. The makers realize what the customs think so that they are happy to pack the goods which will make more money. There is no denying that the disadvantages of excessive packaging far outweigh the advantage, it not only squanders the valuable natural resources, but also result in much pollution. In addition, excessive packaging can make the majority of merchants get high profit for the cheap commodity by improving price. The last but not least, as everyone sees it that distempered of the related laws and regulations and inadequate enforcement of the law together subscribed to this phenomenon. It is time the authorities concerned take the proper steps to solve the problems, and we should spare no effort to beautify our environment. I believe there is no one but longs to have a nice life, so we should bring home to people the value of protecting the environment.
