2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

With the development of science and teconology ,more and more people rely on computer to do anything in their lives. Different people hold different attitutes towards this thing.Some think it is pretty good for those who don't have enough time and need to have a rest .They don't have to spend so much time and energy shopping.However,some people can't agree with them. For their part,they have no time to exersise.It does a lot of bad to their health. What's more,some people may fall in love with the computer and are not willing to go back to work .They believe that the computer has bad inflence. As far as I'm concerned,if we can use the computer proplely ,we can live better lives!