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2012年10月27日雅思大作文真题:广告到底能不能影响人们的消费

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:56浏览次数:6924
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题目要求:

Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?

题目讲解:

题义理解上有那么一点难!但是总之都跟广告有关。

广告使人们都看上去一样,也就是广告的宣传效应会影响人们的消费行为 manipulate people's buying behaviour然后掀起一些特定品牌的时尚create fashion。也就是去写广告的影响力会使一些brands垄断市场monopolise the market。
但是广告其实并不会使人们都一样,我们不能低估人们对于产品质量和个人喜好的理性underestimate people's rationality to products quality and the influence of personal preference.
这么一分析,还是我们说的广告经典题,广告到底能不能影响人们的消费!
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评语:

文中词汇使用灵活,学术词汇积累做的很棒,但拼写错误要注意;作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

Some people deem that advertising exerts a great influence on individual's ideology, and forces the consumers to do the same and look the same. Other people argue that advertisement is an essential part of the human life. No one can avoid being influenced by advertisements. However, individuals have different interpretations about the same topic. From my perspective, the merits of advertising outweigh the demerits, and I approve the latter one. There exists considerable brands of one certain product, therefore, customers have divergent prefernces when they attempt to decide what can be bought and what can not. Take shampoo as an example, consumers can have a variety of choices, such as, Dove, Rejoice, Syoss, Lux ect. Even though the advertisers advocate the virtues of each product, the consumers can still insist their perference. Consumers hold different attitudes towards the quality of a certain product. People's rationality should not be underestimated. It is the common case that one customer maintain the good quality of a ware is the praticality, yet another one assert that the key of the best quality is for the decoration purpose. Different tastes have already decided the criterion of what is superior or inferior. Different economic classes have diverse needs because of the salary, background, the relationship nets, the circles of friends etc. That is to say, the needs of a product are quite distinct among individuals. For instance, a wealthy person may consider perfume as the requisition. On the contrary, a poor regrads the flour as the necessity and he is highly likely to disregrad the existence of perfume. Form this certain degree, how can an advertisement, especially the commercial ones, make people think the same and do the same?

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