小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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A cool girl she is a very different girl , have some amazing ideal and viewpoint . she have a beautiful face and a hot stature . is a good look when she was smiling, but the wonderful girl has a hot temper,so a ice beauty girl are her,some one like her some one did not ,but she does not care this.