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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33546
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Charles Dickens was born on 7 February 1812, at Landport in Portsea Island. He came from a poor background. His father was a clerk in the navy Pay Office, and when Dickens was young, his father was imprisoned for debt. Then he was forced to leave school and work in a terrible blacking shoe factory. Although he received little formal education, his early impoverishment drove him to succeed. He was a good learner, he tried his best to make up for the deficiency through avid and extensive reading on his own. Later, he learned the stenography and became a journalist on parliamentary proceedings.

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