小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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she is a very different girl, have some viewpoint. She is so hot and beautiful. She has a good look time when she was smiling, but the wonderful girl has a hot temper,so some like her some one did not ,but she does not care this. she is my friend Zhou Li Li,about why she is my friend maybe this a secret.