小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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She is a very different girl, have some viewpoint. She is so hot and beautiful. She looks lake very well when she was smiling.But the wonderful girl has a hot temper,so some people like her but some one did not , she did not care this. She is my beast friend Zhou Li,about why she is my friend maybe this a secret.